Coincidence? I think not
Everywhere I go, I see it, I hear it
Spoken in whispers
and some in loud speakers
Messages and songs, saying the same thing
Over and over
Repeating the word: Forgiveness
Quoting the words that say seventy times seven
Why do I feel like a mess?
I thought I had dealt with that…
So why does it feel like I haven’t?
Could it be a scar?
Sitting there, to remind me, so I don’t forget.
Yes, lest I get wonded again.
The marks humans leave are too often scars.
Same humans who probably never meant to
Or maybe they did
Now all I have is a wish
That these scars don’t get my heart marred
I guess I will just wish upon the stars
This post is for W3 prompt #148. I've been working on this one and it just fit into one of the quotes. I hope you enjoy it.
W3 Prompt #148: Wea’ve Written Weekly

A moving poem, Mimi. We can certainly leave scars on each other, sometimes intentional and sometimes not 🙏
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Thank you Dave. ❤️
Sadly so.
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scars can still be felt many years later, but on the inside, rather than the outside
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And I thought they could just disappear.
Hurts a bit that I am realizing this truth, also feels good that I’m learning it. It’s a weird situation for me.
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but, you also have life experience since then too, which helps
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True and well written. Emotional scars are tough to deal with.
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Thank you Tim. I hope we all get the right emotional strength to handle them
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This is a moving poem! Those scars… even when we’re older they still rear their heads on occasion.
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Thank you Colleen. Your words are true.
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You’re most welcome.
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Well done
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Thank you Derrick
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Nice use of the prompt!
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Thank you 😊
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Mimi this is an excellent use of the quote. A very relatable poem!!
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Thank you so much. I’m glad you like it
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Whether intentional or not, a scar is a brand, whether physical or emotional- something that the giver leaves behind for the recipient to deal with. This was so well said.
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The giver leave behind….I love that line.
Thank you Violet
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So heartfelt!
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Thank you so much Kim
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The stars are an excellent refuge, and of course, to wish upon. (K)
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Thank you. 🙏🏽😊
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Certainly seems true that humans probably leave the most scars!~
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Thank you Christine. 😊
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It’s not always easy to heal from scars. Nice write.
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Not easy at all.
Thank you so much Sgeoil. 😊
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You’re welcome.
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